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Thursday 4 June 2015

Anzac writing information report

ANZAC Biscuit Report

In this google doc I will be telling you some details about Anzac biscuits.

The origin of an Anzac biscuit: The Anzac biscuits were made during the first world war to send to the soldiers who were fighting.

What is an Anzac biscuit?  An Anzac biscuit is a special biscuit that has been made by the woman that stayed back from war.

Why did they make Anzac biscuits? They made the Anzac biscuits because the soldiers were usually hungry.  The biscuits needed to last a long time because they were sent by boat to the other side of the world.

Conclusion: ANZAC biscuits were made for the soldiers by people at home who were worried about them.
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  1. Calvin5 June 2015 at 09:08

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  2. Calvin5 June 2015 at 09:22

    Hi Joshua nice work doing your work great gob Keep up that great work !!!.
    From Calvin To Joshua

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  3. Ofa5 June 2015 at 09:26

    Hi Joshua It me Ofa I'm going to blog on Anzac biscuits report.
    l like how you separated your sentences so people know witch idea is diff rent from others.

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  4. Ofa12 June 2015 at 09:19

    I like how you separated you sentences so people know witch is the different from others.You should improve by telling us why do they only make anzac biscuits instead of any other food.

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  5. Jericho19 June 2015 at 09:13

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  6. Jericho19 June 2015 at 09:27

    HI Joshua i like this Anzac Biscuit Report that you did and i like that you wrote a subject for the next paragraph.

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  7. Fraidoon19 June 2015 at 09:46

    Hi Josh I like your report but it is the same as Jericho's you don't have that much sentences in your paragraphs.

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  8. Angari3 July 2015 at 09:09

    Hi Joshua,
    I like how you gave questions about ANZAC biscuits. What really interests me is that you've stuck to one subject and gave some information about it. I think you could improve on not saying this information report is about ANZAC biscuits because we already know that this report will be about ANZAC biscuits.

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  9. Anonymous24 July 2015 at 11:51

    Wow Joshua, I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing about the ANZAC biscuits, especially how you questioned your writing. Keep it up Joshua

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