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Monday 28 May 2018

Leap of Faith

Leap of Faith
The sun had setted and then out came the moon, as it got darker and darker.
Tonight was the night I had a wonderful feeling. My friends and I were going to
look for food but there was one small problem. I had never flown and I wasn’t
sure I knew how.


Tonight was the night I was going to take the biggest leap of faith. “Let's go and
look for some food,” my friends suggested.  I agreed because I was really hungry.
“Hey wait for me!” I said as they flew away.


I was shaking so bad. It was like I was on the edge of a cliff hoping not to fall into
the lava at the bottom. I was being encouraged by my friends so I slowly lifted
one foot. When I lifted my foot up I felt very nervous and shy because it was
my first time. And then I leant over about to jump my talons were shaking so fast.

There I jumped! The wind picked me up so I spread out my wings like an angel,
then I started to flap them, I couldn't believe I was flying. I would never imagine
me ever completing my scariest goal. All of my friends were cheering for me,
I also felt very proud of myself. Then we set off looking for food.

Today for writing I read a poem called Leap Of Faith. Leap of faith is a narrative about a bird going to fly for the first time. So in writing we created our own version of the poem.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joshua,

    You did a really good job making your poem about your leap of faith. I like the way you used powerful words on your poem and it has a lot of details. Well done Joshua keep up the good work.

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